Monday, May 13, 2013

There were many police cars at the entrance. The curiosity and nerves invaded all my body. 
- What the hell...? What happened!
- We can't say anything for the moment. Please, return to your homes and wait for the news.
Of course, I didn't settle with that answer. I looked for somebody who could tell me more information. 
- Teacher! What happened!
- A tragic murder...He didn't agree with his mark...

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4 comments:

  1. alfonso lópezMay 14, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    nice surprising ending. always better with a title, though

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  2. UnknownMay 22, 2013 at 5:14 PM

    I think that It is based on real events. Terrific story!

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  3. UnknownJune 6, 2013 at 6:02 AM

    jejeje i think you want to make it real in some ways....

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  4. The Cookies' TrunkJune 9, 2013 at 8:30 AM

    I like your story, nice ending!!When you base your stories in real facts are very original!!!!!
    María H.

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